All the text is written out on the slide. Not sure how that happened.
The problem with the slideshow is not the template. It is caused by a bug in version g. See this thread and apply the patch:

http://www.zen-cart.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165081

The price is far to the left under the main image.
The template is designed so that the monthly boxes will look best with 3 items per row. If you want only 2 per row you can adjust the css.

The additional images are not showing up.
I checked product number 1 and the additional images are showing fine in just the right spot.