It might be related to the excess markup junk that MS editors insert when editing HTML content. The product you mentioned as not being editable contains typical MS markup tags:
HTML Code:
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Use these bright progressive jigsaw puzzles of
favourite farmyard animal pictures and begin to count first numbers.<o:p /></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Silver award winner.<o:p /></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Links with Early Learning Goals in Knowledge and
Understanding of the World; and Mathematical Development.<o:p /></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Age: 2+<o:p /></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Size: 18x18cm<o:p /></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Arial;">Pieces: 4, 6, 8 & 12<span> </span><o:p /></span></p>
I wouldn't have expected those tags to cause a problem, and indeed, putting just that code in for a description on a test site causes no problems.
When you compare against the other products you quoted, it's worth noting that the markup is much different. For example, the first "editable" product link you mentioned contains a very simple description by comparison:Are you using an HTML editor in your admin area, or do you have your editor preference set to "none" ?