DivaVocals:
But you can write your OWN description and not copy everyone else's.. This is no different than when you were in school and everyone had to write a book report about the SAME book that you all had to read.. You all didn't write the SAME papers (unless you cheated and copied off of someone else's work..) Same principal applies.. Write your OWN descriptions and start to stand out in a SEA of SAMENESS..
I am wrestling with this and I am no closer to coming up with an original description for even a single perfume. I am trying to apply your example of the book report, but I keep thinking that a book report can be a person's interpretation of events. I don't know how to interpret a list of ingredients aside from including flowery words that are just filler and add nothing of value. Saying "creamy vanilla" in place of vanilla doesn't add anything worthwhile and while there are many sites that do play with adjectives, how many times are you going to do that before it gets ridiculous? Isn't this the very reason all of the perfume sites have the same description?
If I don't mess with the fragrance notes, what am I doing different?
I'm looking at a dress on the popular site https://www.modcloth.com and this is the description:
Today’s breezy, sunny weather is perfect for reading a novel in the park while lounging on a picnic blanket in this ruffle-trimmed cobalt dress! The light wind gently flows over this A-line’s textured knit as you sink into the plot.
•95% Polyester, 5% Spandex.
•Fabric provides stretch.
•Hand wash.
•Unlined. Side zipper closure.
•Imported
So they have someone on staff that writes clever copy, but the part that the buyer really wants to know is untouched. The list of details is just a list of details and that is what I would want to know if I was interested in this dress.
I'm looking at the image, skimming over the copy, and I'm mainly interested in if I have to bring this garment to the dry cleaners all the time. So just like for fragrance notes, the details of this merchandise are straightforward. Now, let’s say you had the opportunity to carry the same garment on your website. How would you change up the description? Different snappy copy, perhaps, but the DETAILS would have to remain the same. This garment’s details are my perfumes fragrance notes and I don’t know how else to inform people of the ingredients or add anything else of any value.
If I could see just one suggestion for any one fragrance I carried than I could have a blueprint to follow, but now I am just looking a list and not knowing how I could interpret it any differently.